Dew Haiku

dew drop blue

chained to lifeless bough

buds will form where dew drops rest

pearls of life burst forth

  8 comments for “Dew Haiku

  1. January 10, 2013 at 5:03 am

    This fits the pic quite well. That sense of a new life really comes through in just a few words. Splendid!


  2. January 10, 2013 at 6:24 pm

    I don’t understand the structure behind haiku but I love this. Thank you it brought a smile after a trying day.


    • January 11, 2013 at 2:46 am

      Aww, such kind words! English Haiku’s have a 17 syllables, divided between 3 lines of 5-7-5 beats each. Often they are usually written about nature or the seasons. I like to write them because the restrictiveness of the structure, limits my babbling. :)


  3. January 11, 2013 at 3:34 am

    Simply beautiful!


  4. January 15, 2013 at 10:12 am

    love this because my mother’s name – pearl.


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